Jan 24, 2013 21:11
11 yrs ago
Russian term

огромным ржавым лоскутом листвы

Russian to English Art/Literary Idioms / Maxims / Sayings
I'm just not using rusty, or rust-colored, though I know the color the author intends. Any takers - for that or the rest of the phrase? I'm thinking "shaggy canopy" for огромным лоскутом листвы

A description of a view from a window in the fall.

любоваться огромным ржавым лоскутом листвы, среди которого то тут, то там горят пятна чистого золота или другие, пронзительно – кровавые, как бусинки граната.
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Discussion

Deborah Hoffman (asker) Jan 31, 2013:
this was the final version tattered russet canopy of leaves splashed here and there with pure gold spangles or piercingly blood-red garnets
Rachel Douglas Jan 24, 2013:
Too bad you can't plagiarize James Fenimore Cooper Towards the west, in which direction the faces of the party were turned, the eye ranged over an ocean of leaves, glorious and rich in the varied and lively verdure of a generous vegetation, and shaded by the luxuriant tints which belong to the forty-second degree of latitude. The elm, with its graceful and weeping top, the rich varieties of the maple, most of the noble oaks of the American forest, with the broad-leafed linden known in the parlance of the country as the bass-wood, mingled their uppermost branches, forming one broad and seemingly interminable carpet of foliage that stretched away toward the setting sun, until it bounded the horizon, by blending with the clouds, as the waves and the sky meet at the base of the vault of heaven.

Proposed translations

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russet/auburn scraps of foliage

I don't think you can use canopy here seeing as this is autumn. The trees are shells of their former selves, and 'canopy' doesn't bring that across.

And I actually don't mind 'rusted' or 'corroding' here. It kinda works.
Peer comment(s):

agree Rachel Douglas : With "russet". I think it can be a canopy if it's tattered, more than shaggy: "tattered russet canopy". But "scraps" might reduce it too far.
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Thank you.
agree cyhul
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tawny

Tawny could be a good canopy colour. For the rest of the phrase, your shaggy canopy (or maybe patchy canopy) would work well.
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(to take delight in watching, enjoy) the remnants of rust foliage

Another alternative.




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Note added at 16 hrs (2013-01-25 13:57:09 GMT)
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The rust foliage.







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Note added at 16 hrs (2013-01-25 14:11:16 GMT)
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Giant remnants of rust foliage, might be better.
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